Flash Fiction Friday – 22 July 2011

I thought I’d try writing something for Flash Fiction Friday. I hope you like my perspective on this week’s picture.

The instructions he had received in the post from his Domme had been very clear. He was to be whipped. But this was to be no simple punishment.

First, he was to drive out to the remote beach at the specified time. A route map and GPS coordinates had been provided.
Then he was to strip naked and wait, pressed against the rock, for his Domme to arrive. The photo with an ‘X’ marked on it had made it clear where he was expected to stand.

The burning heat of the sand hurt his bare feet, and he shifted his weight to try to relieve the discomfort slightly. Still this was what he had been commanded to do.

He waited…

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Author: Caitlin

Geeky, kinky and poly. Discovering my Domme side. Sometimes NSFW and 18+.

7 thoughts on “Flash Fiction Friday – 22 July 2011”

  1. This is a great explanation for the picture. Maybe she never shows up, leaving him there to be flayed by sun and desert wind. Maybe he slowly ossifies as he waits. So many wonderful possibilities, and the anticipation makes it all the more appealing.

    1. I’m glad you liked it. And, oh yes, the possibilities.
      I can’t imagine her not showing up at all though. I think I see her secreted somewhere, watching him, testing his obedience and patience.

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